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[주니어] H반 여름 특강 박성주 should parents encourage their children to take part-time job?
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<Parents should encourage their children to take a part- time job>
AGREE
Intro: I strongly believe that parents should encourage their children to take a part-time job.
Body 1
TS: Taking a part-time job makes children be responsibility.
ES: Responsibility is required in every duty. Children prepare for the future through the works that they take before they get a job.
Body 2
TS: Children achieve new experiences when they take part-time job.
SS: New experiences are invaluable asset which cannot obtain from books or schools.
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