[ Body 1 ]
TS ; First of all, even though earning little money, people can spend time with friends.
ES ; Nowadays, people spend little time with their close friends which could be the serious problem.
AE ; Many researchers argue that a lot of people suffer from depression because they do not have enough time for telling close friends of their inner thought. In fact, this phenomenon does not make them work efficiently and even trigger bigger problem such as suicide.
SS ; This clearly shows that having vacation long time is more important despite of low salary.

[Bdoy I]
TS: Taking long vacation enables people to develop myself to change a job provides people with high-salary.
ES: Modern society requires generalist.
AE: When my father was working a company, the company game him low salary and long vacation. He was not satisfacted with his paycheck. By spending vacation time on learning something new or on searching other job, he never stopped learning. He took a time to organize his future plan. Finally, he was able to get a job with high salary. 
SS: This case clearly shows that a low salary job with long vacation allows people to change their life.

TS: Long vacation enables people to keep their friends.
ES: In modern society, people do not have enough time to spend with their old friends.
AE: When I was working in a restaurant near my house, for example, I had no time to rest.
As a result, I could not meet my old friends.
Then I shifted my workplace that could give me plentiful vacation.
I could get enough time to enjoy with my friends.
By spending time with them, I felt comfortable and relaxed, thus I relieved my stress.
Furthermore, this made me focus on my work as well.
SS: This example clearly demonstrates that long vacation helps people make better results in their jobs.

TS : Long vacation allows people to develop themselves.
ES : In modern society, lots of firms require workers for various skills. Therefore, in long term, it is profitable for workers to have a time to develop their skills.
AE : When I was in college, I had a part-time job at a cafe. The job demanded me for many working hours. Therefore, I could not spare time to study. Later, I quit the job at the cafe and got the job in a restaurant instead. The pay was lower, but I had longer vacation. I used my vacation to learn Chinese. Now I work in a firm that requires fluent Chinese. If I kept working in the cafe, I would not have got a job that pays as much as my current job pays.
SS : As my personal example shows, workers can use a long vacation to develop themselves.

TS-Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
ES-Nowadays, stress is known as the major factor of distraction. Also many people are under great pressure because of their hard work.
AE-For example, my dad owns a company. He told me about his company that when he provided workers with short vacation, they had less time to enjoy their hobbies. Therefore, work-efficiency was low. After providing them with long vacation, workers were able to travel around the world on the vacation. By traveling around the world, workers enjoyed their time to refresh. After recieving long vacation workers concentrated and focused on work as well. As a result, providing workers with long vacation not only allowed workers to relieve stress but also enhanced company's work-efficiency.
SS- This clearly shows that giving workers long vacation allows them to relieve stress and concentrate on their work as well.

[Body 1]
Low salary / long vacation

TS: Having a job with a long vacation allows people to develop oneself.
ES: In modern society, it is difficult for people to develop themselves. This is because they are living a very hectic and busy life. However, by having a career with a long vacation, people will be able to have some time to self develop.
AE: For instance, last summer, I had a job with a low salary but long vacation. By having this job, I was able to develop myself. By reading books and spending some time alone, I felt more refreshed and relaxed. This also, allowed me to broaden my perspective.
SS: My experience clearly shows that a job with a long vacation but, a low salary is better than a job with a short vacation but, high salary.

TS1: Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
ES1: In modern society, people are under great pressure due to heavy loads of work. However, with long vacation, they are able to refresh themselves. In fact, this provides workers with work-efficiency as well.
AE1: Last year, I worked in a restaurant. I was so pressured and stressed with my job that I really needed to get some rest. So I received a one month vacation. During the month, I was able to read many books, listen to music and do a lot of things to refresh myself. After my break, I was so refreshed that I could forget about all my worries and burdens of the restaurant. When I returned to the restaurant, I could work much efficiently than before. If it were not for my vacation, I would not have felt better nor made better results in my career.
SS1: This example shows that long vacation helps people to relieve their stress.

B1
TS: The long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
ES: In modern society, most people are busy because of heavy loads of work and so they do not have enough time to consider their health. Through the long vacation, people can enjoy their own time with reasonable money.
AS: Last summer, I got one month vacation from my company without any reward. Even though I didn't enough money to travel other country, I just spent time to read romantic novels and watch movies. I could relax my body in my house. Therefore, when I returned my office, I could focus my work better.
SS: As my experience, the long vacation is useful to reduce stress because there are many things interesting with low money.

TS : Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
ES : In modern society, people are under great pressure.
AE : People need time to rest apart from work. When I took a course in college during weekdays and did a part-time job for weekends over years, I had been exausted. I had no energy to do anything. I told my boss of this, I could take 2 weeks vacation. During this vacation, I traveled abroad. By this long vacation, I could relieve my stress.
SS : My personal experience clearly shows that long vacation enables people to relieve stress.

TS: Getting a job with low salary but long vacation enables people to develop oneself.

ES: With spending enough time to plan and organize, people make their career more professional.

People who get advanced in their career must make better result.

AS: When I was worked at the back which gave me a lot salary but short vacation, due to lack of time, I could never refresh myself and fix the problems.

On the other hand, as I taught children in the kindergarten, there was a plenty of time for me to study and analyze more child education.

Thanks to that period, I could better understand how to make children understood and communicate with them.

It made a great progress for my career.

As my example clearly show that, despite the low salary, long vacation encourages people to make better result.

TS: Long vacation allow people to make better result in their work.
ES: During a vacation, people can develop themselves.
AE: In last summer vacation, I went to Japan to learn Japanese. By spending long time in Japan, I would be able to make new Japanese friends and communicate with them. This made me understand the culture of Japan well and help me learn Japanese. I improved my Japanese a lot at the time. After I came back from Japan, I played an important role in making a contract with Japanese company by using my knowledge about Japan and Japanese. This example clearly shows that enough vacation provide people with time of developing their skills in job. As a result, Long vacation is a good opportunity to improve themselves and make better result when they work.

TS : To begin with, people can take time to plan in long vacation.
ES : With plenty of rest, people can focus on planning their future. This will be their foundation when they work and increase the work-efficiency, too.
AE : Take my father for an example. Five years ago, he was one of the most salary men in contemporary life. His salary was high but there were no time to plan. While working at there, he fell down and depressed gradually. Thus, he changed his job into a teacher. Working in the school is well known for its long vacation. By having long vacation, he could plan what he will going to do in the future. Those plans increased his work-efficiency even though low pay.
SS : As my example shows, by having time to plan in the vacation lead to the increase of work-efficiency.

TS : Long vacation allows people to have time to plan and organize.
ES : Nowadays, people are under a lot of pressure because of burden of work. So, they do not have time to think about the plan of their lives.
AE : When I was busy in learning English, I could not think of my plan of the year.
I lived everyday without thinking. However, during one week of vacation, I could focus on complex thing that was not well-organized and make plans for each month. 
SS : This clearly shows that people make time for planning by having long vacation.

First of all, with long vacation, we can have plenty of time planning and organizing my future. Life is full of choices and when we choose it, it can bring a lot of changes. We must consider this choices deliberately for long time during the vacation and if we resolve the choice in a short period, we can make our life worse. For example, when I was 20 years old, I have to enroll the university but I didn't know what major I want to choose because I hadn't think very much about

TS : To begin with, low salary with long vacation gives people an opportunity to relieve stress.
ES : Resting enables people to refresh themselves so it eventually enables people to raise their ability to work.
AE : For example, Google, which is one of the biggest search engines in the world, provides long and frequent vacations to their employees and it turned out that it actually helped them to retrain their working ability.
SS : It clearly shows that long vacation allows people to relieve stress eventhough they get low salary.

TS: Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
ES: Compared to short vacation, people can spend much time with their friends. By sharing ideas with their friends, people can feel energetic.
AE: When I worked in a design company, I got a two-months-vacation after big projects. I watched movie with my friends and tripped to the United States with them. Although I got a low salary while I rest, the long vacation given to me was wonderful. And after my vacation, I could concentrate on my works better because I had enough time to refresh my mind. In conclusion, long vacation enables people to relieve stress.

A job with a long vacation allows workers to take a rest. In this modern society, people are under the great pressure because of heavy loads of work. Therefore, workers need to have a time to be relaxed. However, the competition in the workplace is so severe that workers can’t enjoy weekends and holidays. Even though the vacation is given to workers, the workers use the time to complement their shortages in order to make a better result than others. Hence, a long vacation, through which people can be refreshed, is required to workers. My father, for example, earns a lot of money from his work. However, whenever I see my father, he looks so exhausted and tired because he doesn’t have time to take a vacation. I figured out that in terms of the quality of life, salary doesn’t guarantee one’s happiness.

TS: A job with low salary and long vacation allow people to spend time with family.
ES: A balance between career and personal life is the issue in modern society.
AE: Many researches argue that the degrees of subjective satisfaction is more higher a job have long vacation even they earn low salary. My aunt, for example, is one of successful executive in Samsung. She earns a large mount of money but hard to have a leave. She divorced last year and seems like unhappy. My sister, on the other hand, is a teacher in elementary school. She earned small amount of salary but have five months of vacation per year. She spent a month in Iceland with her family last summer vacation. She looks happy.
SS: As my personal experience shows that a job has long vacation is better even has low salary.

TS: To begin with, low salary allows me to spend money efficiently while spending vacation for long time.
ES: To spend money efficiently, I have to plan and organize how to use money during my vacation. Also, since I don’t have a lots of money to spend, I can think of the activity that I really wanted to. On the top of that, I could not mindlessly spend money on activity that anything people want to do. AE: A friend of mine, who chose the job that has low salary and spend vacation long, seemed to have lots of experience than the others. Since my friends had a little of budget to spend his vacation, he planed to have ~
SS: This clearly shows that having vacation long time with low salary is better choice

pay good, vacation short / pay bad, vacation long (0)
ts : Long vacation enables people to develop themselves.
es : In modern society, it is the most important not to stop learning. It is not always costly to develop them selves.
ae : As my personal experience, I had a part-time job with a little payment. However, by getting a long vacation, I read a lot of book to prepare the traffic licence. I studied during the vacation, and finally get a licence. If I did not get a long vacation, I would not have a time to develop myself.
ss : This example shows that the job with a less pay but long vacation is better for people to develop themselves.