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¼ÛÇÏ´Ã 17-01-26 11:35
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TS :The people who live in quickly changing world can get the things what they want

ES : Nowadays, the world that changed quickly enable people to choice in various options in short time .

AE : When I was shopping in the department store, for example, I could not find the clothes what I want. However, after two weeks from that time, I could get the appropriate clothes which had the color and design I could have seen before. So, even though being not able to choice what I prefer now, I see the various options shortly after. It could not happen in the past when I had do wait until the things what I wanted appear. I am so satisfying this changing world.

SS :As my personal experience shows that In the quickly changing world, people are more happy than they were before
±è¿¹Âù 17-01-26 11:36
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Disagree
TS : Severe competition made people feel more burdened than before.
ES : As the opportunities for jobs have been decreasing, the competition to get the jobs is much more worsen. Latest research clearly shows that particularly young people who have not gotten their jobs tend to feel less happy.
AE : Take my brother for an example. Unlike my father who is employed in big company, he did not get a job. He failed every job offer so I thought that he was just ignorant. However, the reason why he failed the interview was different than I thought. He did not get an offer due to the harsh competition.
±èº¸¶÷ 17-01-26 11:36
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TS : people should respond to new trends in quickly changing world.
ES : In modern society, trends producers have fast response to consumers' favors. Trends are updated every month and even every week. People have to follow these trends to survive in this fast society.
AE : A few years ago, there was a famous TV show. And It became so popular that clothes and accessories of main characters became fashion trends. However, after TV show finished, the popularity of them decreased and new style appeared. And those clothes became so-called outdated fashions.
SS : This clearly shows that changing trends in fast passing society prevents people from being happy.
±èº° 17-01-26 11:36
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People are more happy than they were before.

First, there are more facilities for people to relieve their stress and enjoy their hobbies. Nowadays, stress is well known as the major factor of distraction. Also many people are under great pressure because of their large amount of work. For example, my dad told me about his story. When he was a high school student, there were less facilities to refresh such as amusement parks and swimming pool. Thus, he was not able to relieve stress. As the time past, many facilities were built for people to enjoy they time. Today, my dad goes to swimming pool not only to relieve stress but also to communicate with others. He told me that today he is more happy than he was young due to newly built facilities which enabled him to concentrate better on his work as well. As my personal experience clearly shows that because of lots of facilities to refresh, people are more happy than they were before.
¼Û¼ö¿¬ 17-01-26 11:36
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Modern society quickly changing makes people feel more anxiety and have low self-esteem.
By growing social media, in modern society, people can access gossips of others more easily and compare with themselves.
When I looked for a job in university, I used to enjoy Facebook in my leisure time. Some of my friends got a job and they posted the result in their timeline while I struggled to seek my job. I downplayed myself comparing with my friends.
As my personal experience shows, Modern society make people are less happy than they were before by developing social media.
¼­Á¤À± 17-01-26 11:37
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The quickly changing world force people to be flexible.
To be flexible, people have to keep in mind the change of environment surrounding them and change themselves according to it. This can be big pressure for people in modern society.
My father, for example, had worked as PD in broadcast company for a long time. In the past, it took long time to change from one program to other program. Therefore, he felt happy when he worked for the TV show he designed and saw this last for many years. Nowadays, however, the trend so fast that it¡¯s hard to catch up. He has to devise new program every week since TV shows is likely to disappear according to the trend. He was less satisfied with his work and got a lot of stress. This example clearly shows that fast change in modern society would be able to give heavy loads of stress to people.
À¯Ã¤¿¬ 17-01-26 11:37
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TS1: Modern society provides people with more job opportunities.
ES1: Compared to the past, there are tremendous amounts of job places in various fields. With more work places, people are able to have better chance to make money, and this leads to their happiness.
AE1: When I was young, my grandparents always told me about how hard it was to live through the hungry seasons in the past. They said that it was so difficult to earn money for their living that they felt very depressed. However, in modern times, lots of companies appeared in various fields. As a result, they said that they were able to be hired from several companies and make money. They thought that the world changed in a good direction which made them relieve financial burden and be happy. 
This example shows that these days, people are provided with more chances to work.
Àå¿ø°æ 17-01-26 11:37
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Modern society allows people to experience the value of diversity. The diversity is derived from the shift in many things in the society, such as diverse fashion styles  which come from the quickly changing trend of clothes. Modern people are following the trend and they easily adapt to another new trend when it comes. Therefore, this quickly changing trend enables people to be sensitive to the field constantly. This can be a joyfulness to people who are interested in the field, like fashion. For example, I like to go to a cafe to try a new flavor of coffee. Every month, the cafe near my house releases a new flavor of beverage and tasting the coffee is one of my hobbies these days. The cafe has to introduce a new drink to people to followed the trend and survive in the competition with other cafes    ´Ù ¸ø½è¾î¿ä
ÀÌÁ¾ÁØ 17-01-26 11:37
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Agree

Generation gap is large in this rapidly shifting world. To be specific, ideals about the society, like political opinions are very different between parents and their children. This gap makes it hard for them to understand each other. My families, for instance, do not share same political standing. That of my grandfather is different from that of my father, which is distinguished from mine. This is because my grandfather, my father and I have experienced different society although we have lived in the same region. When we meet at home we always argue about politics, instead of talking about everyday life of families. It does not seem to improve our families¡¯ quality of life. This example shows that shift in the ideals about the society in this quickly changing world harms people¡¯s happiness.
±è¿¹³ª 17-01-26 11:37
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Disagree

TS: People are happier than before, because there are many places that allow them to feel joyful.
ES: In modern society, people feel very depressed and tired because of heavy loads of work. However, since there are many exciting places where they can enjoy many things, they feel very happy. By visiting these places, people are able to relieve their stress too.
AE: For instance, when I feel stressful, I go to the department store. This is because I like the atmosphere and clean facility there. Since, it is so nice I am able to spend my time with my friends there. Shopping and spending my time in the department store allows me to relieve my stress and feel very happy. Also, compared to the department stores in the past, the current ones are much developed and neat which make customers such as me enjoy the place.
SS: My personal case clearly shows that people are happier than they were before because there are many exciting areas that people can visit.
½ÅÀ¯ºó 17-01-26 11:37
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TS: People are more protected by governnments.
ES: Compared to modern society, people with power oppressed people with no power and deprived them of many things.
AE: The society has been developed in the ways that more people are freer and more rightful.
In the age of empire, kings were rulers of other people and in the early industrial society, capitalists were.
Nowadays, governments for citizens has been established and they protects people by means of many systems. To be specific, Germany regulated that companies must provide workers with 50-days vacation per year and guarantee the lowest pay.
񊧯 17-01-26 11:37
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Disagree
Vacations allow people to feel excited in quickly changing world.
Official figures clearly shows that majority of companies and schools provide people with long vacations to relieve stress of lots of work.
When I was in the college, for example, I was tired of studying and under pressure of work. However, thanks to the long vacation, I could relieve stress. Moreover, I was able to feel excited and energetic by playing basketball during the vacation.
This personal example clearly shows that people are more happy in this quickly changing world.
±è°øÇö 17-01-26 11:38
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TS : Economic growth has helped people buy what they want.

ES : Compare to the past, in economically developed modern society, markets react to people¡¯s need much faster. In fact, recent scientific research shows that people nowadays have broader choice in their consumption than people from the past, leading people to be happier.

AE : I am a person with specific taste for tea. In the past, it was very hard for me to buy the exact product that I want. However, as our country¡¯s economy has prospered, now many firms offer various choices of tea. There are many domestic firms, and also I can purchase imported tea easily. This made my life rich.

SS : As my personal experience shows, people nowadays are happier because developed economy brings people with many possible choices in consumption.
ÀåÀ±Á¤ 17-01-26 11:44
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First, in quickly changing society, people should keep learning new knowledge in order to survive and they won¡¯t have enough time to care their connection. While adapting changes, they must study languages, their major which improves day by day. It will be hard for them to spare time with their friend or relatives who are far away. For example, my father is doctor. He works really hard curing people in the day and he studies new medical medcine
¼ÛÀ¯°æ 17-01-26 11:45
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TS : People can communicate with others.
ES: In modern society, communication is one of the easy ways to relieve stress. Compared to the past, nowadays people can keep contact with remote friends or families better.
AS: For example, when I studied in Germany two years ago, my mother suffered from a cancer. I always called to her and asked about her situations. My mother can feel comfortable by talking with me despite far distance. Although she overcome her illness now, if I did not make contact with her, I would not feel good.
SS: My personal example clearly shows that people can communicate better.
 
 

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