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i) Vacation ¸¹Àº pay ÀûÀº vs money ¸¹Àº break ÀûÀº
ii) work related to one¡¯s major vs new field (beneficial)
iii) get a job abroad vs get a job in one¡¯s country
iv) Business owners are responsible for donating their money to their community.
V) People are only motivated by money.
vi) The most important characteristic of co-worker

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·ùÇüÁø 17-02-08 12:20
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¼ÛÇÏ´Ã 17-02-08 12:22
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[1]
TS1 ; Long vacation enables people to relieve stress by traveling all around the world. /
TS2 ; Long time of vacation gives people the opportunity to make new friends who have different idea.

[2]
TS2 ; Working related to new field gives people the opportunity to challenge in different area which enables them to develop themselves. /
TS2 ; Working in different major enables people to make new friends with which they can communicate and share the idea.

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TS1 ; Getting a job abroad enables people to make new friends with which they can communicate and share idea. /
TS2 ; Getting a job abroad gives people the opportunity to learn about new culture and countries which make them develop themselves.

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TS1 ; Donating money to the community enables it to be developed as the money is invested in many facilities. /
TS2 ; Business owners who donate their money to their community make the image of their company better.

[5]
TS1 ; Money enables people to enhance quality of life by buying convenient devices. /
TS2 ; Money helps people relieve stress by enjoying their expenditure.

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TS1 ; Communication skill enables co-worker to get the higher work efficiency. /
TS2 ; Communication skill enables co-workers to relieve their stress by giving opportunity to talk about their burdens of life.
À¯Ã¤¿¬ 17-02-08 12:23
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TS: Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
TS: Long vacation enables people to plan and organize.

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TS: Working in new fields allows people to broaden their perspective.
TS: Challenging work helps people cooperate with others.

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TS: Getting a job overseas, allows people to learn new languages.
TS: Going abroad for one¡¯s career, enables one to be more outgoing.

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TS: With business owners¡¯ donation, people in need can reduce their stress.
TS: Business owners¡¯ donation helps people in need to enhance their quality of life.

[5]
TS: Buying equipment with money allows people to make better results.
TS: Money enables people to broaden their perspective.

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TS: Communication skills allow people to share feedback with each other.
TS: Communication ability provides people with work-efficiency.
¼Û¼ö¿¬ 17-02-08 12:23
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TS1: A job with less break time enables people to use their time efficiently.
TS2: A job with less break time makes workers facilitate co-work.

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TS1: Familiar works enable people to utilize their networks that(exist Vi¶ó¼­ ²À ½áÁà¾ß ÇÔ!) already exist. 
TS2: Works related to one's major make people maximize their ability by concentrating on their work.

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TS1: Getting a job abroad makes people seek more opportunities.
TS2: Getting a job abroad enables nations to enhance their social system.

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TS1: Mandatory donation for business owners makes governments avoid their responsibility.
TS2: Responsibility for donation causes nations' economy to distort.


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TS1: Money for motivation is not effective for people who already meet necessary needs.
TS2: Money is not the only motivation for people who pursue other goals such as perfection.

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TS1: Communication skill makes people give and take active feedback.
TS2: Communication allow overall work environment to be supportive and proactive.
¼ÛÀ¯°æ 17-02-08 12:24
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TS1: Long vacation allows people to relieve stress.
TS2: Long vacation allows people to meet new people.


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TS1: New field enables people to meet new people.
TS2: New field enables people to broaden perspective.

3
TS1: Getting a job abroad makes people broaden perspective.
TS2: Getting a job enables people to learn languages.


4
TS1: Responsibility for donation provides company with great reputation.
TS2: Responsibility for donation provides society with great motivation.


5
Environment is important.
TS1: Facility motivated workers.
TS2: Faculty motivated workers.

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Communication skill
TS1: Communication skill allows people to give feedbacks effectively.
TS2: Communication skill allows people to understand others.
TS3: Communication skill provides people with work-efficiency.
±èÇýÁø 17-02-08 12:24
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1.
TS1 : Taking vacation allows people to broaden perspective.
TS2 : Taking vacation allows people to make new friends.

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TS1 : Working in new fields allows people to meet new people.
TS2 : Working in new fields enables people to relieve stress.

3. 
TS1: Getting a job abroad allows people to learn new language.
TS2: Getting a job abroad allows people to meet new people.

4.
TS1: Donation allows recipients to reduce financial pressure. 
TS2: Donation allows recipients to improve quality of life.

5.
TS1: Money allows worker to develop themselves.
TS2: Money allows worker to broaden perspective.

6.
TS1: Skillful co-worker provides people with work-efficiency.
TS2: Skillful co-worker provides feedback to each other.
±è¿¹³ª 17-02-08 12:25
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1) Long vacation (w/ less money)
TS1: A job with long vacation allows people to develop oneself.
TS2: Having job with long vacation provides people with an opportunity to travel around the world.

2) Work on new Field (beneficial)
TS1:Learning a new field enables people to challenge oneself.
TS2:Working on a new field allows people to earn many opportunities. (when getting ajob)

3) A job abroad
TS1:A job abroad provides people with an opportunity to broaden their perspective.
TS2:Having a job abroad provides people with an opportunity to learn a new language/culture more easily.

4) Agree (responsible)
TS1:Business owners being responsible for donating money benefit the economy of one¡¯s country.
TS2:A business owner being responsible for donating money to the community benefits the economy of a society.

5) Disagree (money motivation)
TS1:One¡¯s desire enables people to be motivated.
TS2:Other things rather than money allow people to be motivated.

6) Humorous / Funny / Energetic
TS1:Working with a funny co-worker allows people to relieve stress.
TS2:Working with a funny co-worker makes it easy to communicate with each other.
ÀåÁö¼º 17-02-08 12:27
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TS :Many vacation allows people to spend their time on relieving their stress
TS: Many vacation makes people to schedule their plan more efficiently.

2.
TS : Related major makes students to relieve their stress.
TS :

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TS: Getting a job abroad allows people to make more money. Most of the people struggle to make more money. But, In the modern society, because of tremendous of competition, p

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TS : Money makes people to struggle for their happiness. In the modern society, people eager to find their own happiness. The most common idea that related to happiness is the money.
 
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TS :Communication skills allows people to solve the problem more efficiently.
¹Ú½ÃÈÆ 17-02-08 12:27
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TS1: More vacation in work ables people to relieve stress and focus more on their work afterwards.

TS2: This can broaden one's perspective and help them on their business work.

TS1: With a work related to one's major, they can have more knowledge about their work.

TS2: A work related work ables one to study their future work earlier.

TS1: A job in one's country can be comfortable due to close distance.

TS2: Also, they can spend more time with their family and friends.

TS3: A job in one's country will cause less stress that is made by communication.

TS1: Without mandatory donation business owners can focus more on their own company.

TS2: Also, mandatory donation isn't needed since business owners are already paying more tax then others.

TS3: If there is mandatory danation, the poor might rely too much on donations
±èÇÏÁø 17-02-08 12:27
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[1]
TS1  Long vacation allows people to relieve stress. 
TS2   Long vacation gives people opportunities to organize their plan.

[2]
TS1  Working on one specific field makes people know more detail information.
TS2  Working related to one¡¯s major enables people to be more professional.

[3]
TS1  Getting a job in one¡¯s country allows people to build strong relationships with other people.
TS2  Getting a job in one¡¯s country enables people to work in familiar environment.

[4]
TS1  Donating money from one¡¯s business to community is waste of money.
TS2  Donating money will delay the business innovation.

[5]
TS1  Money enables people to have power.
TS2  Money is essential in people¡¯s life.

[6]
TS1 - Responsible co-worker enables others to relieve stress.
TS2 Responsible person tends to work diligently.
³ªÀ±¼± 17-02-08 12:27
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TS1: Workplace with a lot of vacation enables people to relieve stress.
TS2:It makes people to have time to develop their ability.

[2]
 TS1 : Working related to my major enables me to work efficiently.
 TS2 : It allows me to save time.

[3]
 TS1 : Getting a job abroad enables people to get various opportunities.
 TS2 : It allows people to broaden perspective.

[4]
 TS1 : Business owners donating their money makes companies' image better.
 TS2 : It enables local community to develop.

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TS2:

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TS1: Co-worker with bright personality enables
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±è¹ÌÁ¤ 17-02-08 12:28
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[1] acation ¸¹Àº pay ÀûÀº  vs money ¸¹Àº break ÀûÀº
TS1: Money allows people to relieve stress.
TS2: Less break time allows people to become professional at their major.

[2]  work related to one¡¯s major vs new field (beneficial)
TS1: Working new field makes people broaden their perspective.
TS2: Working new field allows people to make new friends.


[3] get a job abroad vs get a job in one¡¯s country

TS1: Getting a job in their country allows people to save money.
TS2: Getting a job in their country makes people keep on the relationship with close people.


[4] Business owners are responsible for donating their money to their community.
TS1: That business owners donate money makes their company¡¯s brand image stronger.
TS2: The community can build public facilities by using the company¡¯s donation.


[5]  people are only motivated by money
TS1: Money allows people to do many things
TS2: Money allows people to relieve stress.


[6] The most important characteristic of co – worker.
TS1: Leadership helps people work voluntary
TS2: Leadership makes the performance of work increase.
ÃÖ¹®±Ô 17-02-08 12:28
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i)
Having vacation allows me to relieve stress from the work.
Having vacation allows me to have time to enjoy my hobby.
ii)
Working in new field allows me to learn various things from different fields.
Working in new field allows me to have widespread perspective.
iii)
Getting a job abroad allows me to make new friends.
Getting a job abroad allows me to learn new languages.
iv)
Starting new business can be more beneficial to their community.
Donating money to community doesn't affect in positive way.
v)
People can do whatever we want to do if we have enough money.
There are things that money can not control such as love, friendship, competition, interests.

vi)
The most important characteristic of co-worker is communication skills.
The most important characteristic of co-worker is personality.
Àå¿ø¼® 17-02-08 12:28
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[1]
TS1 Vacation allows people to relieve stress.
TS2 Vacation enables people to make new friend.

[2]
TS1 Working related to new field allows young adult to acquire new experience.
TS2 Working related to new field encourages young people to get new profession.

[3]
TS1 Getting a job abroad allows people to make new friend.
TS2 Getting a job abroad can relieve stress.

[4]
TS1 Donating business owner's money to their community allows children to give chances such as studying.
TS2 Donating business owner's money to their community enables poor people to help financial condition.
[5]
TS1 Money allows people to make happy.
TS2 Money enables people to not worry about financial condition.
[6]
TS1 Kindness enables co-workers to help each other.
TS2 Kindness encourage co-worker to relate closer.
±èÁö¿¬ 17-02-08 12:30
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TS 1: First of all, vacation with less payment allows people to relieve stress.
TS 2: Next, more time off from work enables people to enjoy their hobby or learn new things.

[2]
TS 1: First of all, working in new fields allows people to make new friends.
TS 2: Next, working in new fields enables people to experience ~/ be a generalist

[3]
TS 1: First of all, getting a job abroad enables people to relieve stress.
TS 2: Next, getting a job abroad allows people to make new friends.

[4]
TS 1: First of all, donating money to the community allows business owners to ~ their business.
TS 2: Next, business owners¡¯ responsibility to donate enables people to relieve stress.

[5]
TS 1: First of all, money enables people to relieve stress.
TS 2: Next, money allows people to broaden their perspective.

[6]
TS 1: First of all, communication skill allows co-workers to get feedback.
TS 2: Next, communication skill enables co-workers to have high work efficiency.
±è¿ìÇö 17-02-08 12:32
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TS 1 Enough vacation encourages work efficiency to be better.
TS 2 Vacation allows worker to relieve stress.

[2]
TS 1 New field of work allows people to broaden perspective.
TS 2 New field of work gives people a chance to make new friend.

[3]
TS 1 Getting abroad job encourages one¡¯s country economy to be developed.
TS 2 Abroad job allows people to make new people.

[4]
TS 1 Donating by owner allows people to reduce stress.
TS 2 Donating by owner gives people chance to be better quality life.

[5]
TS 1 Motivation by money enables people to relieve stress.
TS 2 Motivation by money provides company with great achievement.


[6]
TS 1 Outgoing characteristic allows people to learn communication skill with each other.
TS 2 Outgoing characteristic allows co-worker to provide another worker with feedback.
Á¤ÅÂ±Ô 17-02-08 12:33
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Ts) Having a job in one¡¯s country enables people to get job much easier
 Getting a job abroad is difficult because there are more regulations that has t        be followed.
TS) Having a job in one¡¯s country enables people to devote much easily to one¡¯s family.

[4]
TS) Business owners enable to benefit the society.
 ES) Business owners are usually influential and have potentials to benefit the society.
TS) Donating actions can trigger more donation by being a model to others.

[5]
TS) ......
  ES) Some people make actions out of whim.
TS) People are motivated by many factors besides money.

[6]
TS) Passion enables coworkers to be more efficient in working
TS) Passion allows to withstand people when confronting high amount of stresses.
  ES) Ultimately one would confront a limitation when they step in advanced level of work.
TS) Passion induces positive stimulation to other co-workers.
Á¶Àåȯ 17-02-08 12:34
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[1]
A job with long vacation allows people to spend more time with their family.
A long vacation gives people an opportunity to develop themselves.

[2]
Having a job related to one¡¯s major allows people to get advice more easily.
Having a job related to one¡¯s major allows people to lesson a burden to learn new knowledge.

[3]
Getting a job in one¡¯s country enables a domestic economy to be increased.
Getting a job in one¡¯s country allows people to avoid a double-tax issue.

[4]
Donating money to their community makes it difficult for company to invest core business area.
 
 

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