TS_ES Training part.3-어셔어학원 류형진 / 강남토플학원

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[K-Usher1] TS_ES Training part.3

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1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems.
2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college.
3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job.
4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays.
5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution.

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정재문 17-02-24 12:40 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. ts1; Getting much information can provide people with good topic for communication. es1; Communicating with other people dealing with diverse spectrum of good topic can bring us with a lot of beneficiary. Since, there are a lot of information, nowadays, the chances of communicating has increased significantly. What is more, the quality of communication also improved. ts2;People won't get problems due to much of information since every people have their own frame toward their selves which prevent them from unfiltered information. es2;Since a bunch of information is widespread everywhere, not to be overwhelmed by these unfiltered information, people ,in modern society, have learned ability to cover up these problems.So it doesn't seem to make any problem in human being. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. ts1; The same financial support should be given because sports and social activities enable people to alleviate stress. es1; Since people,in modern society, are under great pressure due to its heavy load of work. By playing sports and social activities, however, they can stop thinking about worries and focus on their work as well. ts2 The same financial support should be given because sports and social activities allow people to make new friends. es2 Sports and social activities increases opportunities to make new friends. Friends from different culture and surroundings can make people to broaden perspective which is considered to be the most important capability we should have in modern society. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. ts1 Studying what you are interested in enables people to alleviate stress. es1 Dealing with stress is really important. All kinds of the diseases that have harmful effect on human being are come from stress. As people, nowadays, live in busy and hectic life, they are vulnerable to stress. So studying that interests people is important since it can prevent people from getting stress. ts2 Stuying what you are interested in allows you to finish your study. es2 As people, nowadays, have tendency not to withstand and quickly drop out , when people come to think about choosing their studying subjects, their interests should be considered importantly. Since studying what your interested in motivate you to know more, it will give people better chance to finish your study. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. ts1; Getting much information can provide people with good topic for communication. es1; Communicating with other people dealing with diverse spectrum of good topic can bring us with a lot of beneficiary. Since, there are a lot of information, nowadays, the chances of communicating has increased significantly. What is more, the quality of communication also improved. ts2;People won't get problems due to much of information since every people have their own frame toward their selves which prevent them from unfiltered information. es2;Since a bunch of information is widespread everywhere, not to be overwhelmed by these unfiltered information, people ,in modern society, have learned ability to cover up these problems.So it doesn't seem to make any problem in human being. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. ts1; The same financial support should be given because sports and social activities enable people to alleviate stress. es1; Since people,in modern society, are under great pressure due to its heavy load of work. By playing sports and social activities, however, they can stop thinking about worries and focus on their work as well. ts2 The same financial support should be given because sports and social activities allow people to make new friends. es2 Sports and social activities increases opportunities to make new friends. Friends from different culture and surroundings can make people to broaden perspective which is considered to be the most important capability we should have in modern society. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. ts1 Studying what you are interested in enables people to alleviate stress. es1 Dealing with stress is really important. All kinds of the diseases that have harmful effect on human being are come from stress. As people, nowadays, live in busy and hectic life, they are vulnerable to stress. So studying that interests people is important since it can prevent people from getting stress. ts2 Stuying what you are interested in allows you to finish your study. es2 As people, nowadays, have tendency not to withstand and quickly drop out , when people come to think about choosing their studying subjects, their interests should be considered importantly. Since studying what your interested in motivate you to know more, it will give people better chance to finish your study.



권민성 17-02-24 12:46 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. TS: Getting too much information can effect people’s mentality in negative way. ES: Too much unwonted information can confuse people’s brain and lead to total chaos. Hence, it will significantly reduce people’s efficiency of doing things. TS: Quality is more important than quantity. ES: As there exists a famous quote saying “One good son is better than three poor sons”, it is always better to accept numbers of good informations than a number of low-quality informations. No matter how many they are, they can be not all helpful. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: By investing in sports and social activities, college can get their prestige. ES: More investment on sports and social activities implies higher percentages of winning in outside-school contests. Trophies and records of these contests can increase college’s reputation and popularity. TS: There should not be any discrimination on college courses. ES: All classes are fair ,and differentiating classes merely because they are not related to academic clearly shows that college is a terrible college. College have to invest same amount of money for all classes to prove that there’s no inequality in their school. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS: It is extremely important to study what people want because of the fact that people don’t have eternal life. ES: People all live once and it would be really melancholy if people must study fields that they are not that interest in but just to get a job.　People will eventually regret in the future of not studying what they truly want to learn at the past. TS:　More interest in work means higher work efficiency. ES: People work hard as they can when they are working in their specialities. they can enjoy work and increase efficiency at the same time. Moreover. Internet clearly proves that many worldwide figures succeed in the field that they are interest in. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. TS: Family times always lead family in negative way. ES: By spending times with family, such as having meals together, they can communicate and share ideas of the other family members. Those events can strongly improve family’s bonds and effect positively in their relationships. TS: Advices of the elders are becoming more important nowadays. ES: In this competitive society, people are lacking of advices to reassure their opinions. However, this problem can be solve by having meals together with their families. Since meal time provides a lot of talking time, Parents can always provide beneficial advices for their children. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning carefully reduces risks. ES: It is the fact that there can be many unexpected circumstances and problems when people do their works. However, by planning carefully, people can lower chances of risks but in other hand, prepare for any unanticipated occurrences. TS: We can save more time by planning. ES: In contrast to do something creatively and abruptly, people can invest their minimum amount of time by planning. Planners keep track of people’s routine ,and prevent time wasting behaviors. Finally, planners help people to results best solution since people possess extra time. Time and planning is something to think carefully about when setting a goal for best solution. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. TS: Getting too much information can effect people’s mentality in negative way. ES: Too much unwonted information can confuse people’s brain and lead to total chaos. Hence, it will significantly reduce people’s efficiency of doing things. TS: Quality is more important than quantity. ES: As there exists a famous quote saying “One good son is better than three poor sons”, it is always better to accept numbers of good informations than a number of low-quality informations. No matter how many they are, they can be not all helpful. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: By investing in sports and social activities, college can get their prestige. ES: More investment on sports and social activities implies higher percentages of winning in outside-school contests. Trophies and records of these contests can increase college’s reputation and popularity. TS: There should not be any discrimination on college courses. ES: All classes are fair ,and differentiating classes merely because they are not related to academic clearly shows that college is a terrible college. College have to invest same amount of money for all classes to prove that there’s no inequality in their school. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS: It is extremely important to study what people want because of the fact that people don’t have eternal life. ES: People all live once and it would be really melancholy if people must study fields that they are not that interest in but just to get a job.　People will eventually regret in the future of not studying what they truly want to learn at the past. TS:　More interest in work means higher work efficiency. ES: People work hard as they can when they are working in their specialities. they can enjoy work and increase efficiency at the same time. Moreover. Internet clearly proves that many worldwide figures succeed in the field that they are interest in. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. TS: Family times always lead family in negative way. ES: By spending times with family, such as having meals together, they can communicate and share ideas of the other family members. Those events can strongly improve family’s bonds and effect positively in their relationships. TS: Advices of the elders are becoming more important nowadays. ES: In this competitive society, people are lacking of advices to reassure their opinions. However, this problem can be solve by having meals together with their families. Since meal time provides a lot of talking time, Parents can always provide beneficial advices for their children. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning carefully reduces risks. ES: It is the fact that there can be many unexpected circumstances and problems when people do their works. However, by planning carefully, people can lower chances of risks but in other hand, prepare for any unanticipated occurrences. TS: We can save more time by planning. ES: In contrast to do something creatively and abruptly, people can invest their minimum amount of time by planning. Planners keep track of people’s routine ,and prevent time wasting behaviors. Finally, planners help people to results best solution since people possess extra time. Time and planning is something to think carefully about when setting a goal for best solution.



신유빈 17-02-24 12:47 183.♡.53.158 TS : Getting much information allows people to reduce risks. ES : Since modern society has become complex, there are many unexpected events which can cause serious problems to people. By planning and organizing with information, they can handle risks. TS : much information is always better than less information. ES : People have ability to compile and summarize information. 2. TS : Sports and social activity allow students to relieve stress. ES : They are under great pressure because of heavy loads of study. --> 스트레스 줄이면 공부 효율 올라간다는 방향으로 전개 TS : Sports and social activity help students make new friends. ES : Friends are one of the most important parts in lives. With friends, they can share feelings and various view points toward the world. 3.TS : Studying what is related to getting a job allows me to earn money. ES : With money, we can travel around the world, learn new languages and do many thing. This make me feel more happy. TS : 4.TS : People can save time by having separate meals from families. ES : In modern society, they are so busy. In fact,in order to have dinner with family, they have to go home from libraies or compaies. TS : People spend more time with friends than with families, nowadays. ES : Compared to the past, they can easily make friends who have common interests and hobbies at the school or by using internet. 5. TS : Planning allows people to reduce the risk. ES : TS : Planning provides people with efficiency. TS : Getting much information allows people to reduce risks. ES : Since modern society has become complex, there are many unexpected events which can cause serious problems to people. By planning and organizing with information, they can handle risks. TS : much information is always better than less information. ES : People have ability to compile and summarize information. 2. TS : Sports and social activity allow students to relieve stress. ES : They are under great pressure because of heavy loads of study. --> 스트레스 줄이면 공부 효율 올라간다는 방향으로 전개 TS : Sports and social activity help students make new friends. ES : Friends are one of the most important parts in lives. With friends, they can share feelings and various view points toward the world. 3.TS : Studying what is related to getting a job allows me to earn money. ES : With money, we can travel around the world, learn new languages and do many thing. This make me feel more happy. TS : 4.TS : People can save time by having separate meals from families. ES : In modern society, they are so busy. In fact,in order to have dinner with family, they have to go home from libraies or compaies. TS : People spend more time with friends than with families, nowadays. ES : Compared to the past, they can easily make friends who have common interests and hobbies at the school or by using internet. 5. TS : Planning allows people to reduce the risk. ES : TS : Planning provides people with efficiency.



박새려 17-02-24 12:47 183.♡.53.158 1. Disagree The best option would be 'adequate' amount of information. But such choice is impossible in reality. Between two options, too much information is better than less information. TS: Having much information can reduce risks. ES: Modern society is full of unexpected events, some of which could cause critical damage either financially or socially. Information enables individuals to plan ahead, thus, prevent the damage beforehand. TS: Having much information can achieve confidence in an individual. ES: As I mentioned, information can reduce risks by allowing people to consider every options. Since the risks are reduced and people know what to expect, they become confident. Confidence in oneself is one of the key foundations for success. 2. Agree Ts: Sports and social activities can relieve stress. ES: Students are under high academic pressure. In these circumstances, relaxing is as equally important as studying textbooks. It gives students time to regain their energy and encourages them to focus on their study. TS: Sports and social activities allows students to make new friends. ES: Human connection is a valuable asset in modern society. Sports and social activities will provide this connection which can not be attained through textbook. 3. Agree TS: Studying what you are interested in can lead to a better grade. ES: Personal enthusiasm is one of the strongest keys to get good grades. Being the top of the class in what you are interested in opens more opportunity for success than being in the lower, mediocre student in what helps you get a job. TS: Studying what you are interested in allows people to meet new people who have similar tastes. ES: Human connection is a valuable asset in modern society. However, it is hard to meet somebody whom an individual can feel connected with, because of people are leading their own busy and hectic lives. Studying what you are interested in, gives an opportunity for people to study in same class with others who have similar tastes or perspectives. 4. Disagree TS: Having meals together as a family can broaden individual's perspective. ES: Family is often consisted of people who have within them, roughly 20 to 30 years age gap. Through meals, younger generation can get useful advice from the elders and the elders can keep track in youthful cultures. TS: Having meals together can strengthen the emotional bond between family members. ES: Disconnection among family members is one of the most prevailing and critical problems in modern society. It is considered as one of the major attributing factors in teenage crimes. Having meals together can improve this condition. 5. Disagree TS: Planning carefully can reduce risks. 1. Disagree The best option would be 'adequate' amount of information. But such choice is impossible in reality. Between two options, too much information is better than less information. TS: Having much information can reduce risks. ES: Modern society is full of unexpected events, some of which could cause critical damage either financially or socially. Information enables individuals to plan ahead, thus, prevent the damage beforehand. TS: Having much information can achieve confidence in an individual. ES: As I mentioned, information can reduce risks by allowing people to consider every options. Since the risks are reduced and people know what to expect, they become confident. Confidence in oneself is one of the key foundations for success. 2. Agree Ts: Sports and social activities can relieve stress. ES: Students are under high academic pressure. In these circumstances, relaxing is as equally important as studying textbooks. It gives students time to regain their energy and encourages them to focus on their study. TS: Sports and social activities allows students to make new friends. ES: Human connection is a valuable asset in modern society. Sports and social activities will provide this connection which can not be attained through textbook. 3. Agree TS: Studying what you are interested in can lead to a better grade. ES: Personal enthusiasm is one of the strongest keys to get good grades. Being the top of the class in what you are interested in opens more opportunity for success than being in the lower, mediocre student in what helps you get a job. TS: Studying what you are interested in allows people to meet new people who have similar tastes. ES: Human connection is a valuable asset in modern society. However, it is hard to meet somebody whom an individual can feel connected with, because of people are leading their own busy and hectic lives. Studying what you are interested in, gives an opportunity for people to study in same class with others who have similar tastes or perspectives. 4. Disagree TS: Having meals together as a family can broaden individual's perspective. ES: Family is often consisted of people who have within them, roughly 20 to 30 years age gap. Through meals, younger generation can get useful advice from the elders and the elders can keep track in youthful cultures. TS: Having meals together can strengthen the emotional bond between family members. ES: Disconnection among family members is one of the most prevailing and critical problems in modern society. It is considered as one of the major attributing factors in teenage crimes. Having meals together can improve this condition. 5. Disagree TS: Planning carefully can reduce risks.



이신원 17-02-24 12:47 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. (Agree) TS: A lot of information can confuse people to select the best information they need. ES: People nowadays are living in a society where technological advancement such as computer has been developed. While the fact that there are too many information people can get is true, there are no evidence that all of them are correct to use them properly. This provides people with frustration when they make appropriate decisions. TS: Getting too much information can lead people to make a worse result. ES: Due to the profusion of information, it is easy for people to mix those information and create wrong understanding. __________. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: Operating sports and social activities enables people to alleviate stress. ES: People nowadays are under great pressure due to their work. If there are not any financial support for sports and social activities, people might not realize both importance and pleasure of sports and social activities. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to meet new people. ES: Sports and social activities can be performed only when a lot of people join the event. Without monetary aid, however, opportunities which make people meet one another will not be given. Thus people will not be able to interact with other people so that they could not broaden their perspective. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. <Studying what i am interested in is more important> TS: Studying what each person is interested allows people to study more efficiently. ES: In this complex society, there are tremendous amount of jobs and they are still being created continuously. Regardless of many sorts of jobs people can work, studying what individual is interested in gives people more opportunities to focus on their work toward their interest without any pressure. TS: Studying what individual is interested enables people to have a good topic for communication. ES: In modern society, interaction with other people who have different points of view is one of the most important things for people to keep connection. By communicating and sharing ideas about fields which are specialized by others, they are able to broaden their perspective. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. <No> TS: Having meals with family allows people to have a daily conversation. ES: In this complex society, the fact that it is not easy for people to have meals with their family due to their work and study is true. However, interaction among family is one of the most important things for people. By spending time and having meals with family, people can share ideas such as what they did currently. TS: Having meals with family enables people to relieve stress. ES: People nowadays are living a busy and hectic life so that they are under great pressure due to their work or study. By having meal with family, people can spend their time more efficiently. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, risk can be a great problem. By having a sound plan, people can avoid threats and prepare for alternatives when they face problems or difficulties. TS: Planning provides people with higher efficiency. ES: Nowadays, it is easy for people to waste both time and money if they do not have any certain plans. By planning carefully, people do not have to think about getting risks from any situation. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. (Agree) TS: A lot of information can confuse people to select the best information they need. ES: People nowadays are living in a society where technological advancement such as computer has been developed. While the fact that there are too many information people can get is true, there are no evidence that all of them are correct to use them properly. This provides people with frustration when they make appropriate decisions. TS: Getting too much information can lead people to make a worse result. ES: Due to the profusion of information, it is easy for people to mix those information and create wrong understanding. __________. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: Operating sports and social activities enables people to alleviate stress. ES: People nowadays are under great pressure due to their work. If there are not any financial support for sports and social activities, people might not realize both importance and pleasure of sports and social activities. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to meet new people. ES: Sports and social activities can be performed only when a lot of people join the event. Without monetary aid, however, opportunities which make people meet one another will not be given. Thus people will not be able to interact with other people so that they could not broaden their perspective. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. <Studying what i am interested in is more important> TS: Studying what each person is interested allows people to study more efficiently. ES: In this complex society, there are tremendous amount of jobs and they are still being created continuously. Regardless of many sorts of jobs people can work, studying what individual is interested in gives people more opportunities to focus on their work toward their interest without any pressure. TS: Studying what individual is interested enables people to have a good topic for communication. ES: In modern society, interaction with other people who have different points of view is one of the most important things for people to keep connection. By communicating and sharing ideas about fields which are specialized by others, they are able to broaden their perspective. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. <No> TS: Having meals with family allows people to have a daily conversation. ES: In this complex society, the fact that it is not easy for people to have meals with their family due to their work and study is true. However, interaction among family is one of the most important things for people. By spending time and having meals with family, people can share ideas such as what they did currently. TS: Having meals with family enables people to relieve stress. ES: People nowadays are living a busy and hectic life so that they are under great pressure due to their work or study. By having meal with family, people can spend their time more efficiently. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, risk can be a great problem. By having a sound plan, people can avoid threats and prepare for alternatives when they face problems or difficulties. TS: Planning provides people with higher efficiency. ES: Nowadays, it is easy for people to waste both time and money if they do not have any certain plans. By planning carefully, people do not have to think about getting risks from any situation.



최문규 17-02-24 12:48 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. TS: Getting much information enables people to have many choices. ES: In complex society, it is important to people to have as many options as possible. By having much information, people can choose the best one among choices. TS: Having much information allows people to reduce risks. ES: In modern society, risks can be a great problem. By having a fine plan, people can avoid threats and plan for alternatives when facing problems. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: Giving sports same financial support as classes allows students to relieve stress. ES: Nowadays, students are under great pressure because of heavy loads of study. By playing sports, students can feel exicted and energetic. TS: Giving social activities same financial support as classes enables students to make new friends. ES: Official figures of educational field clearly show that there is a strong relationship between having many friends and having broad perspective. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS: Studying what individual is interested in allows people to relieve stress. ES: In modern society, people are under great pressure because of works what they are not interested in. TS: Studying what individual is interested in enables people to enjoy their study. ES: In fact, Enjoying study is the best way to get good grades. By having good grades, students can get a fine job. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. TS: Internet allows family members to communicate with each other. ES: In fact, the best point of having meals together is that it allows people to have conversation. However, in this advanced society, we can still have conversation through internet even if we do not have meal together. TS: Having meals together is not the only way that enables familiy members to spend time together. ES: In modern society, there are lots of things to do with family members other than having meals together. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning allows people to save their time and money. ES: In this busy society, it is very important to save time and money. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, it is very important to reduce risks. By having a fine plan, people can avoid threats and plan for alternatives when facing problems. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. TS: Getting much information enables people to have many choices. ES: In complex society, it is important to people to have as many options as possible. By having much information, people can choose the best one among choices. TS: Having much information allows people to reduce risks. ES: In modern society, risks can be a great problem. By having a fine plan, people can avoid threats and plan for alternatives when facing problems. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS: Giving sports same financial support as classes allows students to relieve stress. ES: Nowadays, students are under great pressure because of heavy loads of study. By playing sports, students can feel exicted and energetic. TS: Giving social activities same financial support as classes enables students to make new friends. ES: Official figures of educational field clearly show that there is a strong relationship between having many friends and having broad perspective. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS: Studying what individual is interested in allows people to relieve stress. ES: In modern society, people are under great pressure because of works what they are not interested in. TS: Studying what individual is interested in enables people to enjoy their study. ES: In fact, Enjoying study is the best way to get good grades. By having good grades, students can get a fine job. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. TS: Internet allows family members to communicate with each other. ES: In fact, the best point of having meals together is that it allows people to have conversation. However, in this advanced society, we can still have conversation through internet even if we do not have meal together. TS: Having meals together is not the only way that enables familiy members to spend time together. ES: In modern society, there are lots of things to do with family members other than having meals together. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS: Planning allows people to save their time and money. ES: In this busy society, it is very important to save time and money. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, it is very important to reduce risks. By having a fine plan, people can avoid threats and plan for alternatives when facing problems.



송유경 17-02-24 12:48 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. Disagree Getting great amounts of information allows people to relieve stress. In quickly changing modern society, people are under great pressure because of unexpected risks. However, people can stop thinking about worries by getting a lot of information useful for future. Getting great amounts of information encourages people to search for the suitable information. By using internet, people can access to diverse resources, such as videos, music and picture. By organizing and planning to use resources, people can choose the best solution easier and faster when having a problem. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. Agree Sports activity allows students to relieve stress. In modern society, students are under great pressure because of their academic courses. In fact, enjoying time is regarded as important as academic courses for students because it provides students with study-efficiency. Social activities enable students to broaden perspectives. Thinking broader is important factors for student to adapt to a quickly changing environment. By investing on social activities, college can encourage students to meet diverse friends from different fields. Social activities 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. Studying what helps student get a job allows students to relieve stress. In modern society, students are under great stress because they are concerning a lot about their future. By studying what helps student get a job makes students stop thinking about worries. Studying what helps student get a job enables students to make new friends. Getting a job is good topic for communication. Compared to studying what individuals are interested, by studying what helps student get a job, people can meet diverse friends easier. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. Having meals with family allows people to relieve stress. In modern society, people are under great pressure because of their works and studies. By enjoying their time with their family, they can refresh theirselves. Having meals with family enables people to save time. Having meals Family makes provides people with suitable advises because they spend much time with their familes. In a hectic and busy life, by having meal with their families, they can solve problems much easier and faster. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. Planning carefully allows people to reduce risks. Planning carefully enables people to relieve stress. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. Disagree Getting great amounts of information allows people to relieve stress. In quickly changing modern society, people are under great pressure because of unexpected risks. However, people can stop thinking about worries by getting a lot of information useful for future. Getting great amounts of information encourages people to search for the suitable information. By using internet, people can access to diverse resources, such as videos, music and picture. By organizing and planning to use resources, people can choose the best solution easier and faster when having a problem. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. Agree Sports activity allows students to relieve stress. In modern society, students are under great pressure because of their academic courses. In fact, enjoying time is regarded as important as academic courses for students because it provides students with study-efficiency. Social activities enable students to broaden perspectives. Thinking broader is important factors for student to adapt to a quickly changing environment. By investing on social activities, college can encourage students to meet diverse friends from different fields. Social activities 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. Studying what helps student get a job allows students to relieve stress. In modern society, students are under great stress because they are concerning a lot about their future. By studying what helps student get a job makes students stop thinking about worries. Studying what helps student get a job enables students to make new friends. Getting a job is good topic for communication. Compared to studying what individuals are interested, by studying what helps student get a job, people can meet diverse friends easier. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. Having meals with family allows people to relieve stress. In modern society, people are under great pressure because of their works and studies. By enjoying their time with their family, they can refresh theirselves. Having meals with family enables people to save time. Having meals Family makes provides people with suitable advises because they spend much time with their familes. In a hectic and busy life, by having meal with their families, they can solve problems much easier and faster. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. Planning carefully allows people to reduce risks. Planning carefully enables people to relieve stress.



김우현 17-02-24 12:49 183.♡.53.158 TS: Getting too much information enables people to reduce unpredictable risks. ES: In this complex society, there are many threats and danger such as financial burden, hard seeking employment. By getting too much information, people are able to organize proper plan to avoid risks. TS: Getting too much information provides people with many opportunities. ES: In fact, information is one of the important facts to succeed one's life. By getting too much information, people are able to choose the best option. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to broaden perspective. ES: Compared to not supported institution, There are many chances to learn more information. By providing financial support, people are able to get a good jobs. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to relieve stress. ES: In this complex society, people are difficult to meet new people because of hectic life. By meeting new friends, people can enjoy time with people who have common interest. TS: Studying what people are interesting in allows people to save time. ES: Interesting is the possibility to be favorite. It will help them concentrate on their tasks. TS: Studying what people are interesting gives people a chance to make new friends. ES: In modern society, people are difficult to meet new people because of hectic life. By enjoying interest studying, people are able to expand connection that is important to succeed in one's life. TS: Having meals together with families allows people to relieve stress. ES: In modern society, there are a lot of stressful things. By taking meals together with families, It will be a great chance to talk about problems each other. TS: Having meals together with families enables family to broaden perspective. ES: In fact, parents are the best life teacher because of knowing their family members. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, To obtain the best solution is the fact that experiences many kind of difficulties. However, by having a sound plan, people are able to avoid threats and prepare alternatives when facing problems TS: Getting too much information enables people to reduce unpredictable risks. ES: In this complex society, there are many threats and danger such as financial burden, hard seeking employment. By getting too much information, people are able to organize proper plan to avoid risks. TS: Getting too much information provides people with many opportunities. ES: In fact, information is one of the important facts to succeed one's life. By getting too much information, people are able to choose the best option. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to broaden perspective. ES: Compared to not supported institution, There are many chances to learn more information. By providing financial support, people are able to get a good jobs. TS: Sports and social activities allow people to relieve stress. ES: In this complex society, people are difficult to meet new people because of hectic life. By meeting new friends, people can enjoy time with people who have common interest. TS: Studying what people are interesting in allows people to save time. ES: Interesting is the possibility to be favorite. It will help them concentrate on their tasks. TS: Studying what people are interesting gives people a chance to make new friends. ES: In modern society, people are difficult to meet new people because of hectic life. By enjoying interest studying, people are able to expand connection that is important to succeed in one's life. TS: Having meals together with families allows people to relieve stress. ES: In modern society, there are a lot of stressful things. By taking meals together with families, It will be a great chance to talk about problems each other. TS: Having meals together with families enables family to broaden perspective. ES: In fact, parents are the best life teacher because of knowing their family members. TS: Planning allows people to reduce risks. ES: In this complex society, To obtain the best solution is the fact that experiences many kind of difficulties. However, by having a sound plan, people are able to avoid threats and prepare alternatives when facing problems



이동규 17-02-24 12:49 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. First of all, having tremendous amount of information allows people to broaden their perspective. In fact, having small amount of information makes people have narrowed and biased viewpoints. However, wide spectrum of information encourages people to think with different points of view. Thus, this will be a great asset for people who live in contemporary society. Moreover, having a lot of information enables people to understand about certain issues thoroughly. In modern society, a variety of media provides different information even they mention about the same issue. This will encourage people to completely understand the issues. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college First of all, doing sports and social activities allows people to alleviate their stress. In modern society, people are under great pressure due to heavy loads of work or studying. However, people can relieve their stress after exercising and sweating. Furthermore, doing sports and social activities encourages meeting new people. Both sports and social activities, good device provide an opportunity to share their ideas with other people. Thus, they can think broader with different points of view and it is great asset in contemporary society. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job First of all, studying subjects what helps individual get a job can trigger serious stress. According to a recent research from the United States which is famous for its education, studying other subjects except students are interested in caused a lot of stress. In addition, studying what individual is interested trigger the improvement on students' concentration. Studying favorite subjects, a device improve their degree of concentration. Therefore, they can get further information. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays First of all, having meals with family makes people think broader due to the increase of communication. In modern society, people are extremely busy due to the heavy loads of work even they do not have enough time to talk with their family. However, eating meals together encourages family to share their ideas while they have meal. Thus, they can broaden their perspective by communicating each other. Hence, having meals together help people to thoroughly understand their family. People who live in contemporary society are too busy to share their opinion with their family. However, by having meals together people can interact with their family. It helps them to understand each other more deeply. Thus, it can provide better quality of life. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. First of all, being creative makes people to produce a lot of risks. In modern society, there are tremendous amount of unexpected problems. They can mislead people to failure. However, planning carefully prevents people to make errors or conflicts in their blueprint. Therefore, people can make more successful solution compared to being creative. Moreover, planning carefully enable people to revise their plan. Planning carefully, a way helps people to improve their solution. People can make more advanced solution trough the revising process. Therefore, people can make more appropriate solution. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. First of all, having tremendous amount of information allows people to broaden their perspective. In fact, having small amount of information makes people have narrowed and biased viewpoints. However, wide spectrum of information encourages people to think with different points of view. Thus, this will be a great asset for people who live in contemporary society. Moreover, having a lot of information enables people to understand about certain issues thoroughly. In modern society, a variety of media provides different information even they mention about the same issue. This will encourage people to completely understand the issues. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college First of all, doing sports and social activities allows people to alleviate their stress. In modern society, people are under great pressure due to heavy loads of work or studying. However, people can relieve their stress after exercising and sweating. Furthermore, doing sports and social activities encourages meeting new people. Both sports and social activities, good device provide an opportunity to share their ideas with other people. Thus, they can think broader with different points of view and it is great asset in contemporary society. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job First of all, studying subjects what helps individual get a job can trigger serious stress. According to a recent research from the United States which is famous for its education, studying other subjects except students are interested in caused a lot of stress. In addition, studying what individual is interested trigger the improvement on students' concentration. Studying favorite subjects, a device improve their degree of concentration. Therefore, they can get further information. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays First of all, having meals with family makes people think broader due to the increase of communication. In modern society, people are extremely busy due to the heavy loads of work even they do not have enough time to talk with their family. However, eating meals together encourages family to share their ideas while they have meal. Thus, they can broaden their perspective by communicating each other. Hence, having meals together help people to thoroughly understand their family. People who live in contemporary society are too busy to share their opinion with their family. However, by having meals together people can interact with their family. It helps them to understand each other more deeply. Thus, it can provide better quality of life. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. First of all, being creative makes people to produce a lot of risks. In modern society, there are tremendous amount of unexpected problems. They can mislead people to failure. However, planning carefully prevents people to make errors or conflicts in their blueprint. Therefore, people can make more successful solution compared to being creative. Moreover, planning carefully enable people to revise their plan. Planning carefully, a way helps people to improve their solution. People can make more advanced solution trough the revising process. Therefore, people can make more appropriate solution.



양유영 17-02-24 12:50 183.♡.53.158 @@@ 1번 : disagree TS : Getting as much as possible information can be a way to relieve stress. ES : In modern society, there are many unexpected situation. However, by using information from other people's experiences, people can deal with the situation more. Therefore, getting much information provides people with piece of mind. TS : More information makes people more successful. ES : As commonly known, information is important to be successful. People can apply information from other people's successful experiences to individual's situation. Therefore it will produce better result. @@@ 2번 agree TS : Equal financial support allows students to broaden their prospective. ES : In college, students tend to choose activity according to activity's financial support because financial support means the activity can do lot more things. Thus, same financial support lead students to choose their activity equally, and eventually experience a lot. TS : Equal financial support provides students .. @@@ 3번 : disagree TS : To begin with, by studying what individuals are interested they can do their best. ES : In modern society, people tend to overlook the importance of individuals interest. However, when individuals do work without zenith, they do not concentrate work that much. People do their best when they have fun. TS : They can relieve stress by studying what they are interested. ES : Studying requires much effort. Every one should focus on their subject long @@@ 4번 : 중요 TS : People can relieve their stress by having meals with families. ES : Having meal together with families allow people to take a break. In modern society, people tend to spend so much time to working and studying that they are busy. While they go through all these hardships to make their families happier, they don't have time to this. However, having meals together can make people communicate their family regularly. @@@ 5. Disagree TS : Creativity can be a way to experience a lot and it will be good abilities to get the best solution. ES : Being creative can bring about many unexpected situation. By experiencing various situation, people can broaden their prospective and it can finally lead to the best solution. TS : People should be flexible to get the best solution. ES : In the complex modern society, plans can be ruined easily. In addition to that, people tend to embarrass if there are unexpected situation. @@@ 1번 : disagree TS : Getting as much as possible information can be a way to relieve stress. ES : In modern society, there are many unexpected situation. However, by using information from other people's experiences, people can deal with the situation more. Therefore, getting much information provides people with piece of mind. TS : More information makes people more successful. ES : As commonly known, information is important to be successful. People can apply information from other people's successful experiences to individual's situation. Therefore it will produce better result. @@@ 2번 agree TS : Equal financial support allows students to broaden their prospective. ES : In college, students tend to choose activity according to activity's financial support because financial support means the activity can do lot more things. Thus, same financial support lead students to choose their activity equally, and eventually experience a lot. TS : Equal financial support provides students .. @@@ 3번 : disagree TS : To begin with, by studying what individuals are interested they can do their best. ES : In modern society, people tend to overlook the importance of individuals interest. However, when individuals do work without zenith, they do not concentrate work that much. People do their best when they have fun. TS : They can relieve stress by studying what they are interested. ES : Studying requires much effort. Every one should focus on their subject long @@@ 4번 : 중요 TS : People can relieve their stress by having meals with families. ES : Having meal together with families allow people to take a break. In modern society, people tend to spend so much time to working and studying that they are busy. While they go through all these hardships to make their families happier, they don't have time to this. However, having meals together can make people communicate their family regularly. @@@ 5. Disagree TS : Creativity can be a way to experience a lot and it will be good abilities to get the best solution. ES : Being creative can bring about many unexpected situation. By experiencing various situation, people can broaden their prospective and it can finally lead to the best solution. TS : People should be flexible to get the best solution. ES : In the complex modern society, plans can be ruined easily. In addition to that, people tend to embarrass if there are unexpected situation.



송수연 17-02-24 12:54 183.♡.53.158 1 1) Consuming great amount of time causes people to make problem. For getting much information, unfortunately, people need to spend much time to search data. Also, there are much problems, which are timing is the issue. 2) Much information enables people to hesitate to decide options. Some researchers in psychology fields insists that people tend to have difficulties to make a decision with too much information, compared to proper amounts of that. 2 1) Same financial support to sports and social activities makes most students broaden their viewpoint. Many students have difficulties to get various experiences due to financial burden. 2) Egalitarian approach to sports and social activities for students enables college to increase application rate. By providing equitable sports and social activities for students, college reputation will be increased, rising application rate and financial benefits. 3 1) Studying what people are interested in allows people to be motivated. When people have to do boring tasks, it is not easy for people to concentrate that. On the contrast, however, people of their interest can focus their tasks, enhancing work efficiency. 2) The notion that studying what helps people get a job is good for people based on misunderstanding about nature of modern society. In complex modern society, unfortunately, it is not easy for people to predict promising field to get a job. 4 1) Having meals together allows family to feel closely. Compared to the past, in this hectic modern society, people hard to spend time together even family. 2) Having meals together enables family to communicate one another. In this specialized modern society, it is not easy for people to have common interest even family. By having meals, which is most universal behavior, people can find good topics for communication and an entry point to dialog. 5 1) Careful planning enables people to reduce risks. In fact, in this complex society, risk can be a great problem. However, having a sound plan, people can avoid threats and prepare for alternatives when facing problems. 2) Organizing carefully allows people to make sophisticated solutions. In fact, unfortunately, unrefined creativity is not useful compared to planning ordinary in terms of communication. 1 1) Consuming great amount of time causes people to make problem. For getting much information, unfortunately, people need to spend much time to search data. Also, there are much problems, which are timing is the issue. 2) Much information enables people to hesitate to decide options. Some researchers in psychology fields insists that people tend to have difficulties to make a decision with too much information, compared to proper amounts of that. 2 1) Same financial support to sports and social activities makes most students broaden their viewpoint. Many students have difficulties to get various experiences due to financial burden. 2) Egalitarian approach to sports and social activities for students enables college to increase application rate. By providing equitable sports and social activities for students, college reputation will be increased, rising application rate and financial benefits. 3 1) Studying what people are interested in allows people to be motivated. When people have to do boring tasks, it is not easy for people to concentrate that. On the contrast, however, people of their interest can focus their tasks, enhancing work efficiency. 2) The notion that studying what helps people get a job is good for people based on misunderstanding about nature of modern society. In complex modern society, unfortunately, it is not easy for people to predict promising field to get a job. 4 1) Having meals together allows family to feel closely. Compared to the past, in this hectic modern society, people hard to spend time together even family. 2) Having meals together enables family to communicate one another. In this specialized modern society, it is not easy for people to have common interest even family. By having meals, which is most universal behavior, people can find good topics for communication and an entry point to dialog. 5 1) Careful planning enables people to reduce risks. In fact, in this complex society, risk can be a great problem. However, having a sound plan, people can avoid threats and prepare for alternatives when facing problems. 2) Organizing carefully allows people to make sophisticated solutions. In fact, unfortunately, unrefined creativity is not useful compared to planning ordinary in terms of communication.



박민주 17-02-24 12:54 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. (Disagree) TS: In the competitive society, getting great amount of information allows people to be successful. ES: If information is lack, people cannnot find proper data what they need. TS: There are many unexpected events that would be happened in modern society. ES: People should plan and organize using information. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. (Disagree) TS: Spending time with family is very important in modern society. ES: In fact, people tend to have only few time to spend with family because they are busy. Thus, having meals together is important for family. TS: Having meals with family allows people to relieve stress. ES: During the meals, they can talk to each other and share ideas. People can refresh themselves because 남들을 신경 쓸 필요가 없다. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. modern society->complex, unexpected->plan and organize 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. (Disagree) TS: In the competitive society, getting great amount of information allows people to be successful. ES: If information is lack, people cannnot find proper data what they need. TS: There are many unexpected events that would be happened in modern society. ES: People should plan and organize using information. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. (Disagree) TS: Spending time with family is very important in modern society. ES: In fact, people tend to have only few time to spend with family because they are busy. Thus, having meals together is important for family. TS: Having meals with family allows people to relieve stress. ES: During the meals, they can talk to each other and share ideas. People can refresh themselves because 남들을 신경 쓸 필요가 없다. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. modern society->complex, unexpected->plan and organize



나윤선 17-02-24 14:02 183.♡.53.158 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. 문제가 된다. TS : Getting too much information takes individual to opportunity to talk with others. ES : Since there are diverse types of aids such as Internet, people can access their information by own rather than ask their companies. It can shuts communicating with others. TS : Moreover, there are amount of wrong information. ES : In modern society, people can easily post their own knowledges even though it is not a true. 옵션이 많으면 결정 주저 문제 안된다. 적절한 문제 접근 가능 : 인터넷 템플릿. 다양한 종류가 많아서 이해에 도움이 됨. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS : Sports enables students relieve stress. ES : By given the financial support in sports, students can playing sports more easily. Students can meet their friends at sport complex and enjoy their time which makes students comfortable. TS : Social activities enables students to ~. ES : In modern society, sociality is one of the most important skills. By communicating with others and share ideas, students can grow up as a leader. It will be a great asset for a college too. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS : Studying what I am interested in enables me to relieve stress. ES : Compared to studying what helps me get a job, I can enjoy my time while I am studying what I really interested. It will give me amount of information. By learning this, I would ?? feel happy. TS : ES : 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. 중요해 TS : Having meals together enables people to relieve stress. ES : In modern complex society, people are under pressure because of their works. However, by having a family meal they can complain about their stress and talk about it. Family members will always be your side. It reduces people’s stress and helps people to concentrate their work again. 식사의 매너 배울 수 있음 나중의 식사 예절을 위해 도움이 됨. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS : Planning carefully enables people to reduce risks. ES : In modern society, risk can be a great problem, however, having a sound plans, people can avoid and prepare for alternatives when facing problem. TS : Planning provides people with work high efficiency. ES : Compared to being creative, it is easy to people to use their time and money more efficiently. 1. Some people say getting too much information causes problems. 문제가 된다. TS : Getting too much information takes individual to opportunity to talk with others. ES : Since there are diverse types of aids such as Internet, people can access their information by own rather than ask their companies. It can shuts communicating with others. TS : Moreover, there are amount of wrong information. ES : In modern society, people can easily post their own knowledges even though it is not a true. 옵션이 많으면 결정 주저 문제 안된다. 적절한 문제 접근 가능 : 인터넷 템플릿. 다양한 종류가 많아서 이해에 도움이 됨. 2. Sports and social activities should be given the same financial support as classes and libraries in college. TS : Sports enables students relieve stress. ES : By given the financial support in sports, students can playing sports more easily. Students can meet their friends at sport complex and enjoy their time which makes students comfortable. TS : Social activities enables students to ~. ES : In modern society, sociality is one of the most important skills. By communicating with others and share ideas, students can grow up as a leader. It will be a great asset for a college too. 3. Studying what you are interested in is more important than studying what helps you get a job. TS : Studying what I am interested in enables me to relieve stress. ES : Compared to studying what helps me get a job, I can enjoy my time while I am studying what I really interested. It will give me amount of information. By learning this, I would ?? feel happy. TS : ES : 4. It is not important for families to have meals together nowadays. 중요해 TS : Having meals together enables people to relieve stress. ES : In modern complex society, people are under pressure because of their works. However, by having a family meal they can complain about their stress and talk about it. Family members will always be your side. It reduces people’s stress and helps people to concentrate their work again. 식사의 매너 배울 수 있음 나중의 식사 예절을 위해 도움이 됨. 5. Being creative, rather than planning carefully, results in the best solution. TS : Planning carefully enables people to reduce risks. ES : In modern society, risk can be a great problem, however, having a sound plans, people can avoid and prepare for alternatives when facing problem. TS : Planning provides people with work high efficiency. ES : Compared to being creative, it is easy to people to use their time and money more efficiently.

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35	[K-Usher1] 마지막 통합형 (21)	류형진	17-02-28	3905	0
34	[K-Usher1] Government (14)	류형진	17-02-27	3022	0
33	[K-Usher1] TS_ES Training part.3 (13)	류형진	17-02-24	2622	1
32	[K-Usher1] Before_Exam (14)	류형진	17-02-24	2691	0
31	[K-Usher1] Sea Cow_Review	류형진	17-02-23	2510	0
30	[K-Usher1] TS_ES_Training part.2 (36)	류형진	17-02-23	2587	0
29	[K-Usher1] TS_ES Training (13)	류형진	17-02-22	2550	0
28	[K-Usher1] Tech_Creativity (13)	류형진	17-02-20	2648	0
27	[K-Usher1] Assignment (4)	류형진	17-02-17	2484	0
26	[K-Usher1] Russia	류형진	17-02-16	2789	1
25	[K-Usher1] Mid-term (29)	류형진	17-02-15	2619	0
24	[K-Usher1] Venus	류형진	17-02-14	2383	0
23	[K-Usher1] Friends (17)	류형진	17-02-13	2426	0
22	[K-Usher1] 다음 중 문장을 가장 강하게 만들어 줄 수 있는 방법은? (12)	류형진	17-02-10	2766	0
21	[K-Usher1] Coal	류형진	17-02-09	2444	0

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