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Parents give their children weekly money to buy whatever they want. Some people think this can cause bad habits and ideas about money in children. Others think the opposite. What's your opinion?

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±Ç±âÇö 18-08-28 18:07
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To begin with, it is important for parents to give their children weekly money because they can learn the way to spend money. In that children learn the way, they gain financial stability in the future. To gain financial stability, giving children weekly money is crucial for parents.

In addition, there is no better choice for parents other than giving their children weekly money because children can learn the significant of money. As long as they know the importance of money, they gradually will save money. Regarding saving money, giving children weekly money is the best option.
°­½Åö 18-08-28 18:07
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To begin with, children should have weekly money because children need to learn how to deal with money. As long as children can learn a way to deal with money, they can control their budget (in the future). As penny-pinching life style will lead to financial stability, learning how to deal with money is crucial for children.

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°­½Åö 18-08-29 20:46
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To begin with, children should have weekly money because children need to learn how to deal with money. As long as children can learn a way to deal with money, they can control their budget in the future. As penny-pinching life style will lead to financial stability, learning how to deal with money is crucial for children. For example, when I became a middle school student, my parents gave me weekly money since 6 years old. Since they improved my ability to control my budget, I used to penne-pinching life style. It led to financial stability in my life and I spent my money effectively. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe having weekly money is crucial for children to learn how to deal with money.

In addition, it is important for children to have weekly money because children will spend their whole money to buy something whatever they want. In that children want to buy many things, children will always be short on cash later. To get used to a tight budget, children should have weekly money. For instance, when my brother was a 6 years old, he wanted to buy many things such as robots and blocks. When he got money, he spent his whole money to but these things. Eventually, he was always short on cash. In order to get used to a tight budget for him, my parents gave him weekly money. The example clearly illustrates that children should have weekly money.
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to begin with, it is important for parents to give children weekly money because ´Ù½Ã!
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to begin with, it is important for parents to give their children weekly money because they can buy something they want. In that children buy something they want , they can relieve their stress.  To relieve their stress, the parents should give their children weekly money.

In addition, It is important to give their children weekly money for parents because children can know about how they spend their money independently. As long as children know about how they spend their money, they could save their money for future. As saving money will lead them to financial stability in the future, knowing about how they spend their money is crucial.
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to begin with, it is important for children to get weekly money because ´Ù½Ã! Á¦ÀÏ ¸»µµ ¾ÈµÊ
±èÁö¼ö 18-08-28 18:09
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to begin with, it is good for children to be given weekly money because they can make their own spending habit. In that they can make their own spending habit, they can realize importance of money. As they can realize the importance of money, it is helpful to give children weekly money.

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±èÁö¼ö 18-08-30 16:47
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To begin with, it  important for parents  to give their children weekly money because they can make their own spending habit. In that they can make their own spending habit, they can realize importance of money. As they can realize money is important , it is helpful to give children weekly money. For example, when I was little child my mother did not give me weekly money. I got money when I asked my mom. As I grew up, I have hard time spending money wisely. As I could not make spending habit, I was short on a cash at the time.  This example clearly illustrates that giving weekly money to children is very important.

In addition, giving weekly money is crucial for parents because it is the best way to save money. In that children get weekly money, children have to spend money within amount of money they get from their parents.It means that their parents do not need to give more money over weekly money. Since, parents do not need to give their parents more money, it is the best way to save money. For instance, when my sister was a little child, she also did not get weekly money. In that my parent did not give my sister weekly money, she often ask my mother for money. As she often ask money, my parents spend money for my sister a lot. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe parents should give children weekly money.
ÁÖ¼­¿¬ 18-08-28 18:11
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Parents should give their children weekly money because children need to learn how to use money wisely. In that children can learn how to use more money wisely, they need to spend certain amount of money. To spend certain amount of money, parents should give their children weekly money.
For example, when I was a little child,
At that time, my parents did not give me any allowance. So, I continued to use my parent's money lavishly. Since I was not able to control using money, my parent eventually started to give me weekly money. Owing to this, I learned how use money wisely. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe parents should give their children weekly money.
 
 

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