To begin with, it is important for people to make decision to refer to others because getting advice allows people to realize new ideas.  이 주제는 새로운 아이디어가 있고 없고가 아닌 결정을 내리는 것에 관련된 것이기 때문에 주제 파악 잘못했습니다

As long as people listen new ideas from others, they make better decision. To make better decision, making decision to refer to others for advice is crucial for them. For example, when I was in university, I always made decision myself. When I did the given task, I have no idea about task. Thus, I ask for helping to my friend. By getting advice, I solved the problem. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe getting advice allows me to realize new ideas.

To begin with, it is important for people to make decision to refer to others because getting advice allows people to correct wrong aspect of decision. As long as people revise incorrect aspect through advice, they make better decisions. To making better decision, making decision to refer to others is crucial for people.

To begin with, people should make decisions themselves because people need to save time to make decisions. As long as people can save time to make (to make가 아닌 when making) decisions,

시간을 아낄수있다고 는 괜찮은데 그 다음인C가 말이 안됩니다

 saving time means people can further their decisions. To improve their decisions, making decisions themselves is crucial for people. For example, when I was a middle school student, I always asked my mother all things what I had to do. Since my mother was not always at home, I used to wait her for making a decision. Sometimes it was too late. It was time-consuming work. My mother gave me an advise that if I made decisions myself, it would be a way to save time. After that, I made decisions myself. It helped me to save time. By saving time to make decision, I improved my decisions. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe people should make decisions themselves.

To begin with, people should make decisions themselves because people need to save time to make decisions. As long as people can save time when making decisions, people will have more opportunities from decisions. To have more opportunities, making decision themselves is crucial for people.

to begin with, it is important for people to depend on themselves because people are the ones who most know themselves.

결정을 내리는것이기 때문에 그들을 알고 모르고가 상관이없습니다

In that people most know themselves, they will obviously do their best to make the most helpful decisions. To make the most helpful decisions, it is important for people to depend on themselves.  For example, when my mother plans to save money, she makes a plan herself because she is the one who most knows about her spending habit and the finance in home. So she can always make the best decision about spending budget.

To begin with, It is important to make the decisions refer to other because it can make the better decision than I do.

나보다 결정을 잘 내릴거라는 보장이 없습니다. 잘못된 B입니다

As long as I can make better decision, I have to get advice from others that have more experiences and knowledge about decision. As it can make the better decision, I should refer to others for advice. For example, when I was in highschool, I have to make decisions about my university. Although I don't know what to do, my teacher give advice for me about university. Than I could make right decision about it.

To begin with, it is important to refer to others for advice because other people can give them helpful advice.

도움되는 조언을 해주는것은 당연하죠 !! 그데 해야하냐고 말아야하냐구요! 근거를 말해줘야줘!


 In that people can get helpful decision, they should ask the one who care most about them. since, they ask advice to people who most care about them, it is important to refer to others for advice.

It is better to ask others for advice because they can have various opinions on the same situation.


그들이 같은 상황에 다양한 의견이 있을수있다는 사실은 전혀!!!! 주장을 들어야한다는 것에 근거로 사용될수가 없습니다


As everyone have unique opinions, it is easy to find the most suitable decision. To find the most appropriate decision, people should refer to others for advice. For example, when I was in high school, I did not know whether I should go to the university abroad or study in my country. I was so stressed out that I asked my friends for advice. They suggested lots of options for me and I was able to consider all of these options. Realizing my friend's advice was the most appropriate for me, I decided to follow her option. Looking back, it was the best decision that I have ever made. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe that making the best decision can derive from asking acquaintances.

It is important for me to get advice because I am less stressed out by getting advice.

뭐가 스트레스를 덜 받는거에요?!??! 버럭!!!!!!

as long as I am less stressed out by getting advice, I can make right decision. To make right decision, It is better for me to get advice from others. For example, when I was a high school student, there were lots of thing to decide for my future. I was stressed out by making decision on my own.
I failed to make right decision due to stress. So, I changed the way to decide into getting advice. I was less stressed out by relying on others. I made right decision under the less stressful environment.

I think the best way to learn is through advice from family, friends, and mentors, not by personal experiences. most importantly, it is too inefficient to learn everything for yourself. often you have to rely on other people's advice like when you travel overseas. it's better to get advice from someone who has been there before. otherwise, you might miss many of the best sites and spend too much money.
secondly, i seek advice from others because it is an important part of social life. most people like to give advice to others, because they like to think they are being helpful. therefore, die to inefficiency to learn everything, we should definitely see advice from others not by relying on our limited knowledge we have