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1. argument -> topic
(x) As far as I am concerned, I am in complete agreement with the argument.
(o) As far as I am concerned, I am in complete agreement with the topic.
2. playful physical activities -> enjoyable physical activities
(x) ~~, playful physical activities such as sports can relieve children's stress.
(o) ~~, enjoyable physical activities such as sports can relieve children's stress.
3. feeling -> feel
(x) my feelings become relaxed.
(o) I become relaxed.
4. I am no longer thinking -> I no longer think
5. 문단의 마지막 문장으로 짧더라도 reason 추가
Ex1) Sports can relieve children's stress.
Ex2) Children can learn to collaborate with others when playing sports for fun.
6. belongings -> belonging
(x) they can develop a sense of belongings and unity, both of which may prove to be vital in building a more promising future.
(o) they can develop a sense of belonging and unity, both of which may prove to be vital in building a more promising future.
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