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Some people prefer to get advice from older people like their parents or grandparents. Others prefer to get advice from their peers of the same or similar age. What way do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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±Ç±âÇö 18-08-29 18:48
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To begin with, it is important for me to get advice from parents because parents have had enough experiences on almost every issues in this world. In that parents have had enough experiences, they wise enough to offer sincere advice. Regarding offering advice, getting advice from parents is crucial for me. For example, when I was in high school, I had worry about my future. When I told my friends my worry, they did not give helpful advice. Thus,I told my parents about my future. At that time, they gave me the most helpful answer.
ÇÑ¿ø¼® 18-08-29 18:48
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To begin with, it is important for people to get advice from their parents because parents are wise enough to offer sincere advice. In that parents have enough experiences on almost every issues in this world, they can give the best advice for their children. To get the best advice, it is important for people to get advice from their parents. For example, when I was a little child, I always asked my parents for advice because they were the ones who had many more experiences than my peers so could give me the best advice. Therefore, I could always get the helpful answer from parents.
±èÁö¼ö 18-08-29 18:48
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To begin with, it is important for people to get advice from older people because they are the one who have experienced almost every issue in the world. As long as older people have a lot of experienc, they can give helpful advice . Regarding to get helpful advice, people should ask older people for advice.
For example, when I was a high school students, I concerned about my future.  In order to get helpful advice about my future, I asked my classmates for advice. However, I did not get good advice, because they had the same problems as mine. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe it is important  to get advice from older people.
ż­¿¬ 18-08-29 18:49
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To begin with, It is important for me to get advice from older people like parents because they have enough experiences on almost every issue. In that parents have enough experience, They will do their best to give me the most helpful advice. As they will give me the most helpful answer, I prefer to get advice from parents. For example. When I was a little child, I have some problem related to friendship. My parents are wise enough to give advice to me about friendship because they already experience it. Also, parents love me more than others so they have offered me sincere advice. Than I can make right decision about my friendship.
°­½Åö 18-08-29 18:49
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To begin with, people should get an advice from older people because older people have had enough experiences in this world. As long as older people have had various experiences, they will offer people proper advise about their situation. To get proper advise, getting an advise from older people is crucial for people. For example, when I was a middle school student, I had a hard time with friend`s problem. I asked my grandfather for advise about this problem. He told me his experiences what he already had the same issues. Since he gave me a proper advise, I solved my problem. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe people should get an advise from older people.
Á¶¿¹ºó 18-08-29 18:49
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It is important for me to get advice from older people because they have more experiences than peers. As long as older people have more experiences, I can get the most helpful advice .To get more helpful advice, It is better to get advice from older people. For example, When I was a little child, I tried to plan future. I asked advice to my friends about jobs. I failed to get helpful advice because He was too young to get enough experiences. I asked again to the parents to get more helpful advice about my future. I got helpful advice based on their enough experiences. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe It is important for me to get advice.
ÁÖ¼­¿¬ 18-08-29 18:49
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It is better to get advice from older people because they are more experienced. As they have more experience, they will provide others with the best advice. Since they have the capability to provide others with the best advice, people should get advice from older people. For example, when my father was an university student, he did not know which job he should have. After asking his peers, he could not get the advice that he really needed because all of his friends recommended jobs that are popular at that time. So he went to his grandmother and consulted with her. Since she knew how difficult selecting job is, she gave him a sincere advice, reflecting his attributes. Til now, he is satisfied with his job. It had such a huge influence on me that I believe that getting advice from older people is the most helpful way.
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For me, the person i go for advice when i'm in trouble is my grandparents. for example, i wasn't getting along with my best friends, so i asked them for advice. they also gone through this befre, so they knew what i should do to keep my friendship.
the second reason is that, grandparents are knowledgeable. one time i was feeling really confused about what job to do in the future but i found his advice really useful because they know also about job market these days. not only that, when i was about to drop out of college, they were the ones who stopped me from dropping it. they persuaded to stick to what i'm doing right now with a saying that the job market is so competitive that without college degree, it's really hard to find a job nowdays. that's why i found advice from grandparents to be the most useful and helpful for me
 
 

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